Monday, October 25, 2010

Part 1- its my life

hii guys.. shlonkom??
inshalla im starting this story i have been thinking about for a while... and this is going to be the first post of the story... so tell me what you think of it and please i would appriciate it if i would get feedback about the story... if i dont get much feedback and followers in a while i might not continue the story and just continue writing random posts...
thanks oo inshalla ta3jibkom il story;p

it is NOT a real story.
                                                                                                                                                


it was 2 pm and dalal was still peacfully sleeping beacuse of the late night she had yesterday after talking on the phone to her two best friends jazzi and razan about what will happen today.


yuma dalal yalla goomay 3ashan yamdeech itroo7een il saloon oo itizahabain 7ag ilyom.

dalal: hmm

mama: daloola yalla goomay.

dalal: hmmph inzain yuma kany ga3at walla ga3at.

mama: ee 5osh yala goomay roo7ay '3aslay oo ta3alay ikleelich ligma 3ashan ba3dain itroo7en il salon.

dalal: ok il7een agoom.

mama: yalla ya bnayti la it6awleen.

dalal: emm

just like that thier conversation ended and dalals mother ( fa6ma) left the room thinking that her daughter dalal got up to get ready.


30 minuites later fa6ma came to check on dalal and see whats taking her so long.

mama: ouf dalal yalla goomay ma gimtay tara ma yamdeech ana a3arfich it6awleen 3alla ma itizahabain. YALLA GOOMAY.
she said as she opened the curtains to let the sun in and walked to dalals bed and pulled the covers . and pushed dalal off the bed.

dalal: AAAY yuma laish itga3deeny chithy tara walla itha ga3adtiny ib hedoo2 chan ga3at mn zimaan.

mama: yalla roo7ay zain. wana sarly sina shga3ad asawy. allah iy3een ily ibya5thich. shlon ibyista7mil nomich hath il.......

suddenly dalal gasped cutting her mothers sentence remembering what today was: yuma laish ma ga3adteeny mn zeman.
and just like that dalal quickly jumped of the floor and ran to the bathroom.

fa6ma started laughing and headed towards the door while saying: walla ya yumma law adry ina hal kilmitain biygadoonich chan mn ziman gaylathom.


Dalal rushed out of the bathroom towards her closet.
waay ana shlon nisait ina ilyom fee nass biyoona oo ya56iboony 7ag waladhoom m7amad.

dalal grabed her pink juicy training with a white t-shirt and put it on and grabbed her brown h&m cross bag and her car keys, and phone after checking it she found 3 missed calls and 1 message, 2 missed calls were from her best friend Jazzi and one was from her other best friend Razan. the message was also from Razan saying that she and jazzi will be coming over to her house to help her get ready after she is done with the saloon.
she ran down the stairs and headed towards the door when her mother stopped her

(mama) fa6ma: haw dalal ta3alay ikleelich ligma gabel la ti6li3een.

dalal replied quickly in a hurry: la yumma ma yamdee ba3dain lama arid mn il salon akil shay ma3a jazzi o razan.

fa6ma started laughing at her daughter while saying: 5ala9 roo7ay allah iy7afthich.

dalal blew her mother kisses and ran out of the door to her car.
Dalal ran to her touareg got in, switched it on, turned the radio on and headed to the saloon.


inshalla hal 5i6ba it9eer 3alla 5air moo mithil kil il baji lana 5ala9 ta3abt many 3arfa laish kill mara wa7ed iyee iyshoofny oo ba3dain iyhawen 3ogob ib cham week walla 3omy 7ata malacht oo 7ata 6ala3t ma3a ay wa7ed minhoom 3ashan iy3arfeny oo ma ya3jiba ay shay feeny.. walla many 3arfa laish killa nafs il shay iy9eer feni. itha hatha ba3ad rifathny many shayfa ay wa7ed '3aira 5ala9 ma aby atzawaj. lana 5ala9 ma 9arat hatha 4th wa7id iyeeny in the past year oo yarfithny. hmmph walla many 3arfa shil salfa. bas inshalla ya rab ilyom iytim 3ala 5air.

suddenly dalal started laughing remembering the way her mother woke her up.

so let me tell you about my self. my name is dalal well obviously you already know that and im 20 years old and i am starting my seconed year of university at auk. i have 1 sister, Dana she is 26 years old and she is married to yousif and they have 2 children a boy mishary who is 4 and a half years old, and a baby girl layan who is 2 years old. i also have two brothers 7amani who is older then me, he is 24 and is in his last year of university, he studies in a university in maimi, i know u might think he is too old for university but thats because he took a year of after he graduated from high school to travel with his friends and look for universities abroad. my other brother 3azooz who just turned 18 years old and is starting his first year in university at auk. so me and 3azooz are in the same university.

let me tell u guys what i look like, well im not too tall and not to short so im considered average. i have long wavy dark brown hair that goes up to the half of my back, big round dark brown eyes that everyone says are gorgous and a long nose that matches my big full pinkish lips. i was fit and i did not need to lose or gain any weight. im not going to call myself  hot, cute, pretty or anything but people ussually say that im mamloo7a and attractive.

i finally reached the saloon and got my hair done into big wavy curls just like the picture except my hair was darker.


on the way back home i called up razan and jazzi to inform then that im heading back home and that they should come as soon as possible because it was almost 5pm and the people were coming after the 3isha prayer.

you see today some people are coming over with thier son to ask for my hand in marrige and so that we could meet each other because i dont know the guy i only know that his name is m7amad and as my parents say he is a really good guy and i dont have a problem with that, because i dont mind and i also believe that love could came after marrige.

let me tell you why im very nervous. well thats because for the past year as i said before people came and asked for my hand in marrige and then once they see me and decided that we will go on to the milcha or even before that i get rejected after a week or two. i dont even know why ya3ny itha ga3ad yis2iloon il nass 3any ana som3ity wayeed zaina. i have never been in a relationship, well except this once i was in a relationship with a guy called Jasim and im sure mara7 iy6ale3 kalam 3any lana i believe that he still loves me and wants the best for me.

il tell you a little bit about our story well it all started from our last year of high school when he told me that he loves me and our relationship started from then, i was 18 at the time, we were in a relationship for a year and 4 months, after we graduated from high school we decided to attend the same university so we were both in auk. we loved each other to death and nothing could seprate us from each other, but later on that year we broke up during our seconed course in university of our first year because he said that he does not deserve me and that i deserve better and that his dad is making him transfer his papers to study in london for university as its better then auk and he doesnt have a say in this situation and that he is not worth waiting for. i was so devestated o kanat 7alty 7ala yom we broke up. so he left and we lost contact ever since. i dont believe him i know theirs something wrong but he didnt tell me im so sure of that because im sure i saw tears in his eyes when we broke up. he told me to carry on with my life and if wild il 7alal yany ma arfitha 3ashanna. i still dont get what he meant when he said that. i wash crushed for the next year but then razan and jazzi managed to cheer me up and helped me carry on with my life, and they told me that hes not worth what im doing to myself.



once i got home i went and sat in the living room with my parents and ate a sandwich as i have not eaten for the whole day, while waiting for razan and jazzi.

"beep" text message from jazzi
were here come and open the door.

i left the living room and opened the door and greeted jazzi and razan and headed to my room.

dalal: waay 7ady 5ayfa hatha ba3ad ba3dain yarfithny walla 7ady ta3a8at mn il wath3 many 3arfa laish yarfithoony. and at the same time many 3arfa laish i dont want it to happen because i still love jassim and theres still a place in my heart for him that no one else can take. 

jazzi: 7abeebti dalal 5ala9 jassim is the one that told you to carry on with your life stop looking back maybe m7amad is going to turn out to be better then jassim. i seriously dont know why you still care for him he broke your heart... enough of this talk.

dalal: ok what if m7amad is better then jassim but then he rejects me like all the others.

razan: waay you guys stop thinking my brain is going to burst from all this thinking cheer up... lets just hope for the best. 
she started singing tik tok and dancing around me to cheer me up. this girl really knows how to change the mood.

dalal smiled and joined razan while thinking i hope so.


ok so out of the 3 of us Jazzi is the one that has got the brains and is the wisest. well for her looks she is a bit shorter then me and is quit chubby. she has big hazel eyes, straight brown hair thats up to her shoulders, a small nose and matching small lips. she was very pretty but and malami7ha wayeed 7ilwa she would look very cute if she lost weight.
as for Razan she is the one with the crazy idea's and i was always a supporter of her ideas. we do the craziest things while jazzi shouts at us and sometimes joins us. she is the prettiest out of the three of us her grandmother from her mothers side is spanish thats why she has got colored eyes and light hair. she was taller then me and had the most gorgeus face. her eyes are big and dark grey. she has a small nose, and full lips. as for her hair she had very light brown/ hazel curly hair thats up to the half of her hack. she is simply gorgous. she is currently in a relationship with marzoog. il tell you more about her relationship later on in the story.


the girls started with the make up. it was light smokey not too overdone with red lipstick i didnt need any blush because my cheaks are naturally pink and im sure my mum is going to say something that embarreses me so im going to turn as red as a tomato.  

after the girls were done with my make up i put on a black body under the dress because i thought it was too open from the top, and then slipped into my dress and wore my chanel lulu earings that had their logo dangling down and the matching neckless. and came out of the closet room to show the girls.

my dress was just like the one in the picture:


razan: why why.. why are you wearing a body under the dress its not like your boobs will show.

dalal: chub its the first time i see him oo a6la3la imfa9a5a.


suddenly my bedroom door opened and my mum came in.

razan: 5alti shoofay bintich labsa body ta7t il dress.

i gave her a stare.

mama: ee walla ya mama. roo7ay fi95ee oo libsay il dress broo7a shda3wa moo wayed maftoo7.

dalal: yummmmaa. asti7y, fashla oo ma ra7 arta7 lama ag3ad ma3a itha fi9a5ta.

mama: 5ayfa ya3ny sadrich iybayeen, marada biyshoofa.
and she started laughing along with razan and jazzi.

i turned red while saying: yummmma 5ala9. mabe af9a5 il body.

mama: 5ala9 5ala9 ma gilna shay 3ala ra7tich 7abeebti.

just dana my sister came in

dana: allah allah.. bs laish ta7t il dress labs.....

i cut her sentence because i knew what she was going to say.

dalal: kaify kaify 5ala9 tara athaitoony. ay a7ad thany iygool ay shay 3an il body many nazla zaain.

they all started laughing.

mama: la ma7ad biygool shay oo ibtanzileen.

just then the doorbell rand and my mum and dana went to greet them.


meanwhile i was on my nerves. while watching t.v in my room with the girls.

dalal: waaay shakli zain il make-up 7iloo, a5af  a6ee7 il ka3ab wayed 3alii...

jazzi: baaaaaaaas. your fine maku shay '3ala6 yalla ta3alay gi3day oo chubay.

dalal: ok

after 2 minutes of silence

razan: dalal tara lama tanzileen i7na ibni6la3 ok.

dalal: laish. why dont you sleep over.

jazzi: la2 naby inroo7 il maktaba i want the samra magazine to see pics of the ma3rath we participated in last week.

dalal: oo sa7 saweroona. ok.

the door opened and the maid came in informing me that i should go down.

i walked to the stairs with shaky legs and walked down the stairs then ran back up because i forgot to spray some purfume.

razan: waay yumma shfeech yayatna rakith?? akeed jaikar...

dalal: laaaa2 allah laygoola. i forgot to spray purfume.

i spayed purfume and walked down half of the stairs then i ran back up.

Jazzi: dalool shfeech??

i started walking around the room

dalal: omg omg omg 7ady 5ayfa maby anzil.

razan: 3ayal tabeena ohwa iyeelich fog... ee a7san iyeelcih foog.. bs a5af itsawoon shay.. hahaha

dalal: ya7marra moo wagtich weya ur stupid jokes.

jazzi: yalla nizlay.

dalal: a5af ba3ad hatha yarfithny

jazzi and razan both gave me a stare so i left.

i walked to the stairs when i suddenly ran back to my room finding jazzi and razan at the door ready to leave.

jazzi: waay yumma il7een shfeech.

dalal: hehe.. hmmm.. shakli zain.

razan: ya 7mara yala nizlay.

and just like that they dragged me down the stairs and left from the back door.

and stopped at the big door of the salla and peeked in when my mum cought me peeking

mama: dalal shfeech wagfa ta3alay.



                                                                                                                                   


inshalla u liked the start, tell me what you think of it and please please please comment and tell me what you think.

omg now i know what u guys mean when u say it takes a while to write a post. walla its so hard and i keep changing thinks. bs inshalla u liked it.
oo exuse me for the spelling mistakes and everything lana maly 5ilg i re-check everything.. 
untill next time!!

9 comments:

  1. waay wanasan my first post of my first story... ;p

    7addy yo3anna..

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  2. Keeep the good work up ;p!
    Amazing start!


    Salamiii

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  3. wanasa 3jabatni el bdaya!

    don't stop!!

    kamlaay (:

    ;**

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  4. salamiii: thanks 7ayati

    darliam: inshalla bakamilha...

    bs i still need more followers;**

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  5. allaahhh 3ijbatnyy bidayat il 8i9aa
    continnue pleaaseee:D
    Anonyy 22

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  6. anony 22: i just posted part 2 check it out..
    thanks 7abeebti;p

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  7. i just love it ;*!
    the most interesting part that im dying to know is why gusy reject her after they meet????
    i think its all amazing keep the good work up;*

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  8. rawan: sry i just saw ur comment;p inshaalla im posying part 3 tomorrow;**

    -D: thnx 7abeebti;* inshalla u will know why guys reject her after they meet her and ask about her in time;p

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